0801 Writing practice

In some countries,teenagers have jobs while they are still students.Do you think this is a good idea?Support your opinion be useing specific reasons and details.

In Taiwan,many students have part-time jobs.They work to earn money to pay their tuition and daily expense.I approve this idea.First of all,it is a good chance for students to learn life experience.With the experience of working,students have to learn how to get alone with different types of people as well as how to negotiate with others.What's more,they have to arrange their time effetively in order to get things done in time.
Secondly,students can learn how to spend money wisely.With the improvement of life standard,many families lead a weathy life.As a result, children do not know the importance of saving money and lead a profligate life.If students have the experience of working,they can know earning money is not easy.Sometimes what you pay does not equal to what you gain.
Last but not least,students can learn the importance of being responsible for what they do.While working,students have to accomplish all that they are asked to.If they fail,they have to smell the coffee and solve the problems themselves.To put it another way,they have to learn how to take responsibility and being independent.
In short,though working while they are still students is not a easy thing,students can learn lots of things which text books do not mention at all.