0727 Writing practice

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Television,newspapers,magazines and other media pay too much attention to the personal lives of famous people such as public figures and celebrities.Use specific reasons and details to explain your opinion.

I do agree that media have paid too much attention to public figures.There are several demerits result from the phenomenon.
First of all,the rights of private are offended.The way they use in order to get the exclusive news is much too over,which offense public figures' private. Though paparazzi reveal many scandals or crimes by keeping an eye on public figures,they may offense the law which protect people's private rights. All men are equal and so do these public figures.No one can offend their private. Secondly,reporting too many this kind of news may divert public's focus from those which public should pay attention to.No one cares about the war happens in the world.Ironically many people pay attention to how many mistresses a celebrity has.Last but not least,children are exposed to unhealthy atmosphere which is filled with love affair,bribery,and sex.Growing up in the condition is not good for children's mind development.
Nowsdays all media are full of scandals,bribery,and sexual news,which lead to a dirty sociaty.In fact,there are still many good deeds happen everyday but no media focus on it.In my opinion,instead of paying attention to public figures' private,it is time for media to make a differance to focus on more meaningful things!